Great war it was

When order flies and chaos thrives

When skydown bombs cause men to dive

In sucking mires, where men and horses die

I employ a wild strategy to help me survive;

As soon as I hear rattling guns, I salute immediately

If anyone tries to shoot me, I’ll die with my boots

Scopes will train on me, they dare not wound

It is bad luck to shoot a loon so soon 

After the blood moon

Others swoon like death’s visage was beautiful

I stand ditiful, spiffing young lad strapping, brave in battle

Wode was on me then, sense was overthrown

I don my berzerker’s bear hair shirt, like I work at Dublinia again

I was into madness; woe of my foes which in waves are sent.


I run from one shell hole to another carrying my own pack, bad batsman

Pissrag to stop gas smothering me

Mad hatter, solely shadows owning like a batman

Impacting rain abrasive the front changing

Slime of the salient like the bog of ancients

Choked with unwilling sacrifice

The votive knife slicing from barrels red hot piping

Bullets like lightning in speed, Sleipnir’s bane

Or quick-tossed grenades, or a slow sniping

Death is a piper and he pipes all night

Snipers taking pot shots my way

Highway formed of sludge

Rats run the length of sludgy runnels carved by artillery Ezekiels

My khaki trousers mudspattered, claggy, cracking and heavy as my pack

I screw off my bayonet and use it to whack away the harder stuff

I reach into my mobile larder

Take a smoke out light it with my lucifer fast as a charger

Smoking a pack of day since I hit Picard clay.


Mammetz wood anyone, certain cure for lust of blood

Lying facedown in the shrubbery

His congealing blubber rank in the hot summer

His butter-coloured fingers with a fudgy texture

I turn him over, his overgiving flesh like overfresh fruit

What before was his visage has been corrupted, flyblown

Ill-suited for prose, let alone a sacred poem

He was mostly bone, though some flesh clung on dogged

Evidently, a rocket struck him, though it appeared a rock

Had struck him savagely, as on some primeval planet

Gaining advantage in days before Adam, parts of him atomised

Utterly, I surmised better to check his pockets: dockets, a beloved’s locket

Token that might be proffered to a glass case, gazed at in amazement

Hole to center grizzly open casement yet I face it

He is phased to alteration

What stasis his groundturned face paved gave away at his pate’s raising

His face fell away like wet wallpaper

A gallery of pain, his exposed mainframe

Maze of frayed wires, hempen hawsers outfalling

Sprawling like Rapunzel’s ponytail

His eyes freed of glaze roll from caves

Like ghouls from out of graves brain-craving

Case in which his brain resided formerly

Before his unborning, his torturous malforming

Sits now like an open cave

Brave Northron spelunkers awaiting, chain with his name

He was brave and now blameless

Among Homer’s graceful immortal dead, pocket the change

Pockmarks along a grassless mile, like postholes, marking unmarked graves

The unready, the unwary, all unsaved

Interred unsaintly beneath the salient

Awaiting the day of judgement

The ancient of days

The new sun’s ray encasing.


Some flee, I am here by king’s decree, bullets miss me

Screaming of bisected horses, Tommies dissected glad they’re dead

Funeral of the unwedded

A million nameless dead inscribed upon a cenotaph

Tides parting like I held aloft a staff, waves crashing down at my back

Dashing Pharaoh’s twenty thousand strong chariot force

Such as it was in this war, when mechanical force foreswore bravery’s best

Third tranche in France

Frontline since early days, flatlining in my battle trance

Steel shrapnel barbed wire genocide

Night’s denial at flight of lightful flares.


From gorgon’s leadbelching eye none can hide, destroying alldescrying

All this crying foreseen in my black scrying mirror, left back in Bethune

No flares required, for the full moon sheds a tallow sun’s light

Light on my feet sticking to trees and piled scree, debris of an old church

Grimace at the ivy’s loudness

Girdling my head the climbery; the green man of Vimy

I was on the frontline at the Somme

Some like it hot, I like it raining down bombs

My heart is a song sung by a drunken viking

Long in glory, his horn sounding endless

Venomous rivers slither between freshdug canyons

Cannonsong, I make my way through collapsed dugouts

Corpses snouting out, those who did not make it out

Hands jutting out, mouths craving dustless air therein, scouting

Forward I creep low moving as a stole might all bend and meander

I take a gander at the remnants of a grenadier 

My foot sinks further than expected, near Atlantis

It like a realm of bad fantasy, this flensed France

No bird sings, no leaf and no branch, no blade of grass

No ants, just corpses and rats and death’s many chances

Chanting in who knows what language, ducking well practiced

It all seems to vanish, charging forward with perhaps anguish

My vision is blurred and I am taxed overly, my fatigues crack

With every forward step as do the rifles, cackling like crones at my back

I smack against the wall as a missile smashes into the ground ahead of me

Tracks of a rudimentary tank lacking shell and crew, flames crackling

Snipers track but miss me, I can only kiss my miraculous medals

I can barely discern the slick, splinter-spined duckboards

Beneath grim, toxic battle wine; blood, soot, mud, disease, gas, horse.


I left my mask in my billet, quicker to sprint and fight another day

When you’re got you’re got there’s no other way, but I won’t cop it today

As I say it, to spite me, a grenade almost slays me, exploding not two metres away

Eventually wet clay hardens giving to hay, on the frayed edges of the conflict

Here I hear neither wolves nor woeful missiles whistling, I listen

And for the first time in months hear birdsong

I can almost hear the worm turning

Ears burning for melody, tired of doleful threnody sent by enemies, blessed see

A sea of grass and wildflowers, loud with the bee, on the leeside of heaven

The rays his radiance sheds meet my legs

Music as heard in opiate mount Abora

I am suddenly without boots, my rank livery removed

I am proofed in pure white, wearing sandals on the arboreal mountain

Surreal theatrically as in a flight of fancy yet more tangible, reality

Hiding in my priest hole, praying to saint barbara

I take aim, fire, the rest is on the armourer

I shed my scythe, yet remain a farmer

It all seems barmy from here, I do no harm anymore

I allow the fastened door of my armoured core to creep open

Out seeps adoration’s light, igniting a fire all along the ridge

A beacon fire calling every sight, come to this fire’s might, this night

All fighting will cease, mothing towards that utter brightness

From above, surely a thing godsummoned, which man is not mustered to it

No more clouds of mustard gas will swim across no man’s land, bad for lungs

Moses how it leads them out, this must be the promised land

The living come to embrace the vanquished, the enmity’s source vanished

No more are conflict’s flames fanned, no more do planes down

Like phoenixes languishing from axe hits, in circles sitting

Like planets in placid orbit, sharing stories, none of war, none of glory

Hostility ends forever, all gordian knots are severed, the violent and the clever

Unite to make everything better, no more the belting gavel, no more the belt

And rod, no more the gravelled meadow, no more the shadowed citadel

No more cavalry, no more children in dire need, no more amputees on the street

No more chimneys belching acrid toxins, no more sewage in the Atlantic

No more the reign of Pan, no more is the prophecy of Atlantis applicable

Efforts once fickle now mighty united, thriving unseen, violence’s balm

Is calmness and plenty, respect and filled belly, bounty for all, denizens

Equal in quality and esteem, all may pride and pursue life unfettered

Knowing no gods and no betters.

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