Raiding in blue

Caked, tugged at, sucked back, slowgoing, wading

Lost Tommies shelldefeaned leadpregnant

Advancing slowly whilst grenaded

Man insane to go against machines

Without officer’s baton and ironed strides.


Imagining ranks of young Frenchmen

Artists and teachers, future lynchpins

Of society and pillars, perhaps, some

Sons prodigal, the rum-dumbed

But none death deserving

None so numb to love our Lord above stopped strumming his lyre

Silent music easing eager hearing hearts, courting generous ear

Bright blue uniforms like a storm of blazing heavenlight

Carving a cousin sun into the night

Lighting up like ten million Christmas trees, unto France’s bleeding.


Grievers carving friezes, lest forgetting

Names and ages of those dead

Not in pages but writ cold stone eternal

Whole world verdant, allpasture churned by anarch’s turmoil

To a roiled, ruined, rapture appleless curdled

To a poison garden.


Shell-dug fissures, oil-surreal murrains 

Troopers screaming, dying ancient bog deaths

Soil-caked hands rise from a sucking pool

Attempting to climb air, unmoving

Damp, jewel-draped hands in Arthur’s grasp place Excalibur

Scabbardless, outsinging, for Arthur not Launcelot

Water droplets bead its neck, steel swan unwanton

Like dew on ruff petals

Like envy inducing diamonds gleaming

Eyes sightless banding a diadem

Querent’s symbol neck of drowned swan forged rigid anew.


Mad Atlantean phantom hatching from a lake silvered to a Diana mirror

As at Nemi, once vast pleasure barges resided in sordid excessive plenty

Wherein ancestors and chosen champions cavorted in forbidden dalliance

Lamplight romps, animal-masked

Assuring of progeny visages hideous to vision

Lead to no man’s land’s dead centre by death.

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