Green Hell

Vietnaming names they blacked out of docs, alphabet black ops

Men sweat so much they’re made of salt

Heat trapped in by a verdant vault

Riddled fronds mark where they repelled last night’s assault

It’s so hot the gunmetal boils, hotter than I ever recall

Lightless flame and flameless light, the blameless dead in the charmless night

The guns recoil as if in horror

There is surrender with honour

There is – radio shhhed by screeching bomber

Burns from that napalm no balm will salve

A line of pleasant palms bullseyed by missile salvo.


Sailing grenades wailing at eachother like duelling banshees

Sailing downriver no one ever plucked a banjo here

Deliverance, risen up from death or fear.


Purple haze and a whole rainbow of chemicals

Mirrored aviators, copper tache with an attache case that’d stock an alchemist

Green berets caught red handed, the tower of bayoneted babies by now rancid stands for 

Unsure what my stance is, keep my boots planted

Elephantine gods who rose and reigned before the fall, their visage haunting pillars in the jungles under fog

Poison frogs throning logs, lizards the size of dogs, deep sucking bogs, rampaging feral hogs, older things that scarce evolved

Enemy presence here is strong, I can sense a thousand vietcong

Yet I cannot see a single one.


Burnt body clean up, sagging bags tagged boys inside them

War is hell his helm decrees, swoops low brests ruinous debris

Smoke smell on the breeze, a lifetime’s debriefing needed

Heli door leaners disrupt the rice harvest, shot up the crop

They shout sorry when a stray dog cops one, wordless for dead sons

Fevers out here’ll turn a man inside out, shit squirting out red like had rusted spout 

Heavy smoke session, eyes to heaven

Souls of levelled friends ascended

Life the bread’s unleavened present

Heavy rain means heavy shelling, keep Charlie at bay

Practising drills, marching in formation when jungle to single file distils

Can’t have another Tet offensive, mindset defensive

Pensieve hippy soldiers bouldered on witch finger blems

Odour from the open tentflap, disorder in the ranks

Imagine giving them an order

If each death is expensive, here is mounting debt.


Spend your birthday on sandbags

Fewest bloodstains makes glad rags

Bent double like old hags

Two gunners trading fags for mags

Send your sister a thanks card

Fresh socks, my feet wet which never mine met

On my account don’t fret 

By my count six months left

Pray my gun won’t jam, sending best to the fam

Signing off lights are shining on, sun force through dark like a battering ram.


We’re fighting ghosts 

You can’t nuke ideas

Bombing and bombing

And bombing to free us.


The Gunboat sides would scald your hole 

Flotilla fleet like a surface shoal

Forward stole, through gunfire wove

Settling smoke white as peace doves

Bullets spiral  

Turning from horrors to solace of bible

Helis saw in firing rockets

Torture victims left to mock us 

Nothing shocks us

In Hannoi line of mannish boys muddying their waters

Emptied for pointless death in goalless slaughter

The river is brown and murky, teems with scabrous form 

Every vile thing there abounds, even fish sporting horn

Da Nang is loud with bangs, Apache nose with painted fangs.

Enough rizlas to shroud a mummy, forget you miss your mummy

Mist your mind, it feels lovely, sandbags almost snugly

Out here reside villains, valiants, dalliances behind french valances

Shifted power balances, old crumbling residences

If you’re moving, keep moving like a machiavellian schemer

Under torture realized your handlers never laid out the schema.


Skeet bites itch like eczema, exert you to death out here

Every second plants feeler is a life stealer

Never been a kneeler but Rimmon’s altar appeals

An apple is peeled and placed into a stuck pig’s mouth, sides of trout and pints of cloudy stout for portly majors

Men are kept like beasts, beaten like curs, suspended until lamed in watery cages

Stages of grief, meaningless the musings of sages in a rank pit swimming with dire phages

There are no roads between hills tramped passable by steers

Artillery sinks down into bog like a corn king’s torn corpse when the rivers near.

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